With a nod to Yousei Hime who truly had an influence upon my haiku writing last winter … no, it was the winter before, when I was not able to do a whole lot else. I learned to truly enjoy one line haiku. So these four haiku are for the prompt at The Imaginary Garden With Real Toads . Kind of stupidly I wrote the haiku incorporating words from the list before I paid attention to kigo … something that I now must do. The wordlist is from Patricia McGoldrick whose blog can be found here. Her word list from which poems were meant to be written follows the 4 haiku. Thank you Patricia for your prompt and hard work.
I am adding these words 1:57 PM 10/03/13, sort of for accuracy, I guess. 1,2, and 4 are haiku because their subjects are related to nature. 3 really is a senryu because it is like a haiku in form but as it is about human beings it is called a senryu.
with the death of weeds – wildflowers spring to life
snow laden cherry tree branches – shelter a chickadee
share sake and borrow laughter – to quench your tears
leaves turning color – make a painted fall fence
Patricia’s Word List
Neighbor / Neighbours
Fences
Handshake
Barbecue Potluck
Borrow
Return
Garden
Weeds
Trees
Snow
Weather
Laughter
Tears
Children
Parents
Birth
Death
Teenagers
Stoop
Deck